Lowgan's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Castilleja]

You should have probably just put these all on one piece rather than upload 3 separate recolors of the exact same image. That being said this is something that looks like it should be kept to DeviantArt and the like, I don't think Newgrounds is the best place for things like this.

xscar10 responds:

While I agree that this could have been one image, I wholeheartedly disagree that this shouldn't be on Newgrounds. While this is a place that might have higher standards, that doesn't mean that any one medium should be excluded due to someone's personal taste.

[BlueBell]

You picked a great thumbnail because I was not expecting this at all when I got here. There is a huge range of quality and like OnlyTom said, the textures and definition are really inconsistent, not only that but the choice of colors assaults the viewer's eyes. It kind of hurts to look at with all that bright blue and yellow, but I feel like the color would be less noticeable with appropriate adjustments to shading and definition. I'd keep working on this one if I were you.

[Starkitty]

Is she supposed to look like that corset thing is keeping in a ton of bulging fat? Because with the lighting and the creases you gave her it looks like she'd just burst outta that thing if the straps were loosened.

EnvythisRoadRunner responds:

Yea, the character is generally kinda fat. So drawing her with a corset, I wanted her to look like she was trying to be supa sexy, but in reality, her thickness is showing through her outfit :P Thanks for noticing

[Alexis Pose]

The lighting is really good, like Mrlol said it almost looks like a photo at a glance, but her head and hand look pretty disproportionately large. It might just be the head, actually I think it's size is making the hand look funny by relative size.

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Fnibble responds:

I completely understand what you are saying.

[Gaia]

I like the concept, like the way her hair turns into the vegetation trailing behind her and the whole mother earth thing, but I just think that it was done somewhat poorly. I think just improving your fundamentals would help a lot with the problems you seem to be having.

[The Grocery Store Rapist]

I work part time at a Piggly Wiggly and we're told to push plastic on the customers. I wan't told why, but it seems that almost all of our customers would be in trouble with this guy, lol.

Oh yeah, but customers only have to choose what kind of bag when they're checking out, so wouldn't that be too late for the monster guy to choose his victims based on that?

comicretard responds:

What, you don't go back to grocery stores? You go to a new one every time you need groceries? I guess to escape his rape you could just have your groceries delivered...

[Crashing Wave!]

It's not bad, but I think you used too much white on the left, and you should have blended a little. I also think the frame you put on it distracts from the piece itself. Some seagulls would be nice too.

[Violinist]

Before I read the caption for a brief moment I actually thought you didn't know how a violin worked. Now i know better, lol.

[Calender Crasher]

Needs work

I just don't think there's much about this that's good, it's almost monotone, there's no detail, and the proportions are off. I don't mean to offend but this looks like a base or a rough draft, needs some work.